Editing Progress - Final Changes

Once we had graded the video, we asked our teachers to review it for a final time.
The first teacher gave us the following feedback:

From this feedback, we added a fade at the beginning as we agreed this was more conventional of a music video. We also worked harder on the grading of the paint fight to make it more aesthetically pleasing.

As for the recommendation that we make more of the paint fight shots slow mo, we found this a difficult change to make. This would mean that the pace of the video would be slowed down dramatically. It was also difficult to do as we hadn't filmed everything in 60fps so not all shots could be slowed down to any more than 70-80%. We discussed this with the teacher and considered the changes, but decided that it would not be the right decision at this stage of the project. Following these changes, we had a test edit ready for final approval:

We then showed this version to the other media teacher who gave us the following suggestions:

We made these changes, including adding forest Alice in Wonderland footage over the top of the shot of Georgie before she is in the forest paint fight. This was to aid the narrative and make it more obvious why there was a change of scene, as well as linking the paint fight back to the overarching Alice in Wonderland theme.
Once we had made these changes, our final video was complete. This is available to view at the top of my blog.